Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Tuesday, April 07, 2009
Ghostly past
sepia-tinted photo of me swaying in a swing- AM I A GHOST? swing sways creakingly colour replaces sepia
Wow, I really LOVE this one! I have to say it's one of my favorites by you (or anybody). The naisaiku format is particularly good for the subject, don't you think? I really like how you weave the element of time back and forth over the central ghost image. Wonderful!
"AM I A GHOST?"~ -without access to to material facts even the sanctified courts of law would not find it easy to answer that question-(gutsy introspection nonetheless) as for me,i am happy to read ur writings without being 'judgemental'_ but then one does always revere ' The Holy Ghost '..thanks for sharing this..
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Wow, I really LOVE this one! I have to say it's one of my favorites by you (or anybody). The naisaiku format is particularly good for the subject, don't you think? I really like how you weave the element of time back and forth over the central ghost image. Wonderful!
Lovely words Gautami, this really takes me there - love the way you question, Am I a Ghost?
Ah..Lovely. Loved the tweak; It really doth provide the thump to the write..:)
how have you been doing? long time no see..
hope you are well...
Gosh this is good!
nicely done--the poem worked well in this pattern
"AM I A GHOST?"~
-without access to to material facts even the sanctified courts of law would not find it easy to answer that question-(gutsy introspection nonetheless)
as for me,i am happy to read ur writings without being 'judgemental'_
but then one does always revere ' The Holy Ghost '..thanks for sharing this..
Interesting take.
wonderful !! one of the best i have read on your blog !! (coz i dnt understand many ;) )
wow.. nice one :)
woah i liked this a lot!
Was picturing myself.....
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