Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Wednesday, November 18, 2009
perfectly plastered
plethora of prickly, pompous people prevaricate
procastination psyches me out
porous plaster pedantically pours over parallel lines
I push the plate of peas placing it primly on paper
purple nail paint prominantly displayed on pampered fingers
Perhaps it would be possible to preempt your poem's predicament to pontificate on the plebian pleasure of onomatopoeia by prescribing a precursive, peaceful and parsimonious path to Prema Sai or a plate of Primavera... please :)
Such rich images. Love the purple painted nails the best... and I can see pursed lips, as well, perhaps with pomegranate lip potion placed upon them... lol.
I love the purple nail paint one, and how you handled parallelogram. You have such a nice touch, precise, and playful at once. I always like reading your work.
from Therese L. Broderick -- I like how this poem makes me equally aware of both the P consonants and all the vowels. I wasn't aware of all those similar vowels when I read the prompt list, focusing instead on just the consonants, but this poem draws my attention to the singing vowels: the long E in prickly and people and prevaricate, for ex. (and several other examples).
I get the vision of a boring dinner party with a bunch of drunks who think they're fabulously philosophical when inebriated. And you threw in a few p words of your own. Awesome.
I always enjoy the concise, direct energy of your poems. The pampered fingers with the purple nail paint were a vision. Thanks for sharing the well crafted work, Gautami. I enjoyed reading Donn's response too. =D
what to do what to do what to do, perverting p word change into an accordion of pee-but-nonetheless-not-pee-sounding-words..You are my heroine, save me, save me from the insanity of my affinity for Sexy Tri-focals, I can beg
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You did a great job with those impossible words! (They were tricky, weren't they?)
That is awesome! Wonderful use of the words!:) Just great...
I tried to come up with something with all those words, but for now have given up due to time constraints :)
The poem is perfectly written. In a short phrases, it express many things. Kudos!!!
Perhaps it would be possible to preempt your poem's predicament to pontificate on the plebian pleasure of onomatopoeia by prescribing a precursive, peaceful and parsimonious path to Prema Sai or a plate of Primavera...
please :)
Difficult words nicely handled.
Hi Gautami,
Producing a potpourri of poems with the words peppered through, is great!
Nice job!
What a hoot!
Great job...
Such rich images. Love the purple painted nails the best... and I can see pursed lips, as well, perhaps with pomegranate lip potion placed upon them... lol.
I love the purple nail paint one, and how you handled parallelogram. You have such a nice touch, precise, and playful at once. I always like reading your work.
from Therese L. Broderick -- I like how this poem makes me equally aware of both the P consonants and all the vowels. I wasn't aware of all those similar vowels when I read the prompt list, focusing instead on just the consonants, but this poem draws my attention to the singing vowels: the long E in prickly and people and prevaricate, for ex. (and several other examples).
I get the vision of a boring dinner party with a bunch of drunks who think they're fabulously philosophical when inebriated. And you threw in a few p words of your own. Awesome.
-Nicole
Nice use of the words; I really like how the p sounds build some great consonance over the course of the poem.
The simplicity of the lines builds some very compelling images that flow very nicely together.
I think this is nicely done. Love the purple nail paint!
Perfectly painted pompous peeps - superb. So many fine images!
A preposterously perfect poem!
What a fine job - so many funny images in this poem.
I always enjoy the concise, direct energy of your poems. The pampered fingers with the purple nail paint were a vision. Thanks for sharing the well crafted work, Gautami. I enjoyed reading Donn's response too. =D
nice use of those pppppp words....thanks for sharing
It's a party I'm glad to read and *not* attend! I'm with the POV, here!
Particular piece of poetry.
Pest, no, best wishes ;-)
Ralf
what to do what to do what to do, perverting p word change into an accordion of pee-but-nonetheless-not-pee-sounding-words..You are my heroine, save me, save me from the insanity of my affinity for Sexy Tri-focals, I can beg
Well, there you have it, Sir Percy--THIS lady takes no offence at the "P" word!
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