I found a feather
in the margins
notes written for me
the frantic desires
depicted for all to read
you collected me
in those pages
invisible to others
I see the silken threads
the ties, the knots
your dexterous fingers
working those
"I like the slide of your breath against my skin"
13 comments:
Gautami....?
You too with the sexy 55?
I LOVE IT!!!!!!
Reading between the lines is an ART!
Thanks for playing today, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
BTW...?
How do you say YAHTZEE in Hindi?
Beautifully expressed..like your writes..always..
I really liked this, well done.
Rockets and Wings is my 55 this week.
Oh, so beautiful. I love being carried away on the wings of your words of fancy.
Thank you!
xoxo
whew...smoking ending...written in the margins...i like that too..
lovely 55.
keep it up.
:)
Very romantic and colorful.
So very original and sensuous...
The wordplay was a real killer here, Gautami!!
"I like the feel of your words against my mind" :)
Lovely 55!!
This is so sexy!
Beautiful work.
Gautami, found this at Writer's Island. You take such care in choosing your words. The simplicity of a feather between pages... lovely.
Thanks, hon. Amy
P.S. Here's mine:
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/03/07/bound-writers-island/
Gautami,
Read all current poems. All show various emotions and touch a chord in one's heart.
Take care
Thanks for sharing, princess poetess.
have a smiling Monday.
A++
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