let me hold your tiredness
and those troubling thoughts
you have, will disappear.
I will dissolve all those in a chemical
of my own making,
the scent of which will engulf us.
I will add our combined forces
so that no negative thing pitches out
"I will attune it all to flow smoothly between us"
40 comments:
sounds like a perfect chemistry to me
:)
I gave a standing ovation to this..Gautami..the words..'combined forces' make it all so easy..
smiles. nice bit of chemistry you got going in your 55...
Gautami...
Very sensual today.
Someone would be very lucky to be loved by you.
Most excellent 55 My Friend.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
I'm thinking of a good back rub followed by a glass of Malbec. Smiles.
What a lovely 55! I like the tone and the cadence. And the sensuality of it is great. Really fine writing!
perfect chemistry :)
and sensual too
Anything that can dissolve problems has got to be good chemistry!
Your writings have taken on a nice, sultry quality lately, Gautami. I'm sure there's a reason and I'm sure it's good. :)
I like this chemistry......Smooth and soothing
cool chemical reactions, if not, that's physical reaction..
thanks for the inspirations.
love your 55.
Oh, this is so relaxing, Gautami.
Actually, it sounds like a lot of work to me. But the kind with nice pay offs.
Very tempting... beautiful!
~laurie
Ohhh... this is wonderful, sensual, inviting, promising.
Gautami, a lovely sensual piece.
It is all about chemistry.
Pamela
Beautiful! Now that's a chemistry that would be life-altering!
Ooooo, very nice! I do believe we make new chemicals according to the different friend and lover matches we make.
And, a bit unrelated, I shall make YOUR very own special sidebar button next, and post it on my site! Look for it in the next 1 to 36 hours! whooohoo.
xoxo
Romantic science - that's a new one, and so delightful
Sensual and endearing. This is beautiful! I'm still letting the words and the visuals swim in my mind while I imagine the speaker and her audience.
Gautami, although I like your title, I think you might want to call this one The Chemistry of Sensuality. It is smooth and so visual somehow. Great writing,
Elizabeth
Smart, loving work.
I like the chemical part.
Very well done!
When the desire to heal meets chemical . . this is one terrific scientific remedy. Lovely.
Love that science has measured the differences in chemistry that occur within us when we meet with ones we love...great poem!
They say that love is chemistry. This sounds too good for simple science though.
Dissolution becomes a lovely thing. Nice.
When Chem mixes in with physics and bio, the magic is beyond historic!
Nice flow to this one, Gautami..
The perfect scientist!
The chemistry of our love for each other. Ahhhh.....
ah how luck to have someone like that in our lives :) :)
When the chemistry becomes unstable, is that a bad thing or a good thing?
What a challenge.
Please have a good new week.
daily athens
wow the waters are calm...
That is a beautiful promise of love.
Gautami, not just maths, you are master of chemistry as well! Like the way it is put.
lovely to be able to attune like this.
Lovely, lovely, lovely!! if that's not poetry in words, then I don't know what is.
You offer much in your gentle way. I enjoy the scent of your pen's scratches
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