Sunday, May 10, 2009

powdered space

cyber dust-
what's it like to be
powdered space

27 comments:

Janice Thomson said...

Love the humor in this :)

Amias said...

I don't know, but sometimes I feel so blown around. :)

theweekthatwas said...

Clever, took me awhile to figure it out but was excited when I got there.

anthonynorth said...

Very clever.

SandyCarlson said...

Transient, insubstantial, everything. Cyber reality feels that way.

Edward S Gault said...

This taking the prompt down to the
Atomic level!
Excellent.

Greyscale Territory said...

"Powdered space" is so sonorously close to "powdered face"! Some fun punning, squishing the galaxy into a small enigma!

Lorraine said...

I prefer baby powder ;)

spacedlaw said...

We all have stardust in our bones.
Thanks for the poem.

gautami tripathy said...

Gemma, I never thought of powdered face while writing this!

pia said...

I feel like that too often. Not sure that cyber space isn't powdered dust and we're all just specks, some specking more brightly at times

Thanks for your wonderful comment. It's hard not being a mother in today's world, but somehow that's only discussed in infertility articles which....

Deborah Godin said...

I really enjoyed this, it's like a little cosmic in-joke...or maybe a big inter-galactic one.

Beth P. said...

sparkles of dust
each alike, but surely
each different--


Thanks for the smile and the re-cognition!

Pam said...

Your poem is wonderful and very thought-provoking. I may have to find a sunbeam and watch some dust today.

Sue said...

"powdered space" -- what a fabulous phrase!

Jim said...

Hi Gautami, so that's where our e-mail goes when we hit Delete! Thanks!
..

floreta said...

makes me feel shimmery! :)

Whitesnake said...

You taking the piss?

Jeeves said...

:D

Rajlakshmi said...

powdered space... hmmm
nice...

Poetikat said...

It's too early for me for this...I'll come back after I've had my coffee. I like the words. Hmmm...

Kat

Patois said...

Quite delightful!

Tumblewords: said...

What fun - a visual feeling!

RBroeker said...

I don't know what it is like, cause I am materialised light ...

Good one, GT!

Best wishes
Ralf

gabrielle said...

a digital koan
playful, full of wonder,
powder to poems

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

:)

Tammy said...

I loved powdered space Tami. :)