Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Wednesday, May 13, 2009
unfocussed
I get so nervous when you bicker at me and then the trajectory of my focus goes awry.
23 comments:
Love the Indian Sentence... the last word is such a very clever turn!!
Sometimes, short is the sweetest. I agree, the last word makes this work.
How true.
A nice take.
reminded me of a 12 step slogan..."Do you want to be right, or do you want to be happy?" Good job.
I can hardly think with all the yacking in here! ;>)
This happens to me too!
Short and to the point. I like it!
Would it be amiss then if I gazed instead of speaking?
An awry focus is one of the worst things! :) Neat sentence full of pith.
I can feel it. You have to look out - it might be that you can't stop it anymore. Good one.
Best wishes
Ralf
interesting and true
"Trajectory of my focus" I like that!
pithy and true.
Another single sentence- this is terrific! I really like your writing here. Great stuff.
Bella
Great! I use to love doing one sentences 3WWs.
whadda great line..
Annoyingly true and then we find a great retort a day later.
Very well done.
Short and sweet
Thats lot said
I like... Alot!!
Very precise
Great!! Precise one line :)
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