Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Wednesday, May 06, 2009
Succinct
Weren't your messages to me supposed to be cryptic? Do you have to flash those toall and sundry and malign me?
Very cool. This is the first I've seen where the words were supposed to be cryptic but weren't. Oh, there's some fire behind this. Can really feel the anger.
16 comments:
Very succinct. But I like the way it builds.
when I am busy, i like fewer words. good job.
Short, sharp and to the point.
short but meaningful
Phew. I just used that very word - succinct, in a comment elsewhere!
And I wonder WHO it is that you're mad at now?
Way to use the words to simply but powerfully drive their potent meanings home!
you do these well.:)
Succinct indeed!
Nice...
Lovely! I tend to be extremely verbose. It's good to be reminded by examples such as yours how powerful few words can be. Well done!
Short and sweet. Says a ton...
yes i do cos i love u
Stick that in ya cryptic malign and sundry flash thingy!
Very cool. This is the first I've seen where the words were supposed to be cryptic but weren't. Oh, there's some fire behind this. Can really feel the anger.
I instantly pictured a girl and her fella and him flashing her loving messages to his mates. Short and very sweet.
Nicely done!
Ah, here I was expecting a poem, and instead I get a very clever sentence using all three words. Well done!
full of passion and fire... love is always interesting..
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