cemented in my ways
yet I make you sway
WILL YOU MARRY ME?
swaying to my tune
forever cemented
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that burning heat reaches out, touching me, almost scorches my sensitive skin. Just as suddenly it touches those exhilarating heights, so calming. fire was never so welcome, coming from your inner core anything is.
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17 comments:
ah, yes marraige cementing a relationship...
and off toppic you are tagged....
I err Hmmm Well now err I sort ta ..........hmmm .....Yep!
.. great poem .. many thanks ..
mmmm... love the intensity in this one. peace, jp/deb
Hi Gautami, forever cemented, now there's a thought!!
...btw here is a little something I wrote for you earlier...
sway
You come up with the most amazing images! I always enjoy what you write!
I like your use of 'cemented' - powerful connotations.
interesting! :)
So important to have that cement in a relationship.
Fabulous. I love, love, love the first two lines.
I like the words you used in this especially cement and sway. Very cool!
cemented is a word not often used with love/marriage - it rings a new bell! nice...
nicely written....forever "cemented"....hmmmm not sure about that
Thought-provoking. I wonder who's cemented and who's swaying.
-Nicole
succint and powerful
your brevity's clarity bounces well, i see grey wind blowing. refreshing read.
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