Wednesday, May 13, 2009

unfocussed

I get so nervous when you bicker at me and then the trajectory of my focus goes awry.

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23 comments:

Andy Sewina said...

Love the Indian Sentence... the last word is such a very clever turn!!

ThomG said...

Sometimes, short is the sweetest. I agree, the last word makes this work.

MG said...

How true.

anthonynorth said...

A nice take.

Life without Clots said...

reminded me of a 12 step slogan..."Do you want to be right, or do you want to be happy?" Good job.

MichaelO said...

I can hardly think with all the yacking in here! ;>)

Daily Panic said...

This happens to me too!

Angel said...

Short and to the point. I like it!

Brian said...

Would it be amiss then if I gazed instead of speaking?

Tumblewords: said...

An awry focus is one of the worst things! :) Neat sentence full of pith.

RBroeker said...

I can feel it. You have to look out - it might be that you can't stop it anymore. Good one.

Best wishes
Ralf

Unknownwriter and Almost Lover said...

interesting and true

Linda Jacobs said...

"Trajectory of my focus" I like that!

irenet said...

pithy and true.

bellamocha said...

Another single sentence- this is terrific! I really like your writing here. Great stuff.
Bella

sage said...

Great! I use to love doing one sentences 3WWs.

one more believer said...

whadda great line..

Tammy said...

Annoyingly true and then we find a great retort a day later.

Ann (bunnygirl) said...

Very well done.

maglomaniac said...

Short and sweet

Jeeves said...

Thats lot said

Lion-ess said...

I like... Alot!!
Very precise

Megha said...

Great!! Precise one line :)