Monday, April 04, 2011

misty dew


I touch the dewdrops
close my eyes tight
wish for those to surround me

I taste my fingers
each dewdrop tastes like elixir
I collect some in my palm

sprinkle those on that window
watching droplets scatter
on that window in a pattern

I slowly rub the dewdrop on you. 
when it penetrates your skin
you swiftly turn towards me 

rose misted droplets on that glass
covers your curved back
while you cover me with you

18 comments:

Wayne Pitchko said...

so many great lines here Gautami...soo good to read...thanks for sharing your words

Ramesh Sood said...

Very passionate and nicely written.. liked it..dew drops are so soothing..

Everyday Goddess said...

nice! i like the way water blends all things together.

Mama Zen said...

Very sensual!

flaubert said...

Beautifully sensual piece, Gautami.

Pamela

Ron. said...

It's ALL goooood; and the last stanza's a killer.

Kristen Haskell said...

Water is a sign of life as is love.

Stan Ski said...

Great crescendo effect, building to the last stanza.

Elizabeth said...

Wonderfully intimate and sensuous. And I love those last lines. It builds and then fulfills itself.

Elizabeth

Tumblewords: said...

Beautiful - it offers delicious imagery and a lyrical flow.

honeyhaiku said...

This is wonderfully sensual and sexy!

Celestial Dreamz said...

beautifully sensual ... :)

Tess Kincaid said...

This made me want to lick dew from my fingers.

Steve Isaak said...

Intimate, mood-suffusive work. Excellent.

Rene/ Not The Rockefellers said...

dew la la...:)

HyperCRYPTICal said...

Beautiful and very sensuous.

Anna :o]

izzy said...

Coming around full circle! Nice-

I tasted water on glass first - kind of metallic, because our water is...
then rose water - which is a bit softer.
Thanks!

priyaiyer said...

Loved this! :)