where is the fire?
you say look around
it is in the air that surrounds you-
in the intimacy of two of us
we hold it in the palm of our joined hands.
when these words touch me
I feel a slow burn on my skin
knowing fire is not for away.
" I am burned before I reach the ignition point"
19 comments:
Phew! you're really hot!!
<3 Andy
That's indeed beautiful..
awesome!
One of your best, I think.
Great write.
A very apt title.
Hot Poem.
delicious.
I can feel the electricity from here. Bravo.
You said so much in so few words - hot!
Enjoyed this one.
Matthew
I really like this. It's simple and effective.
concise and crisp
Love it.
great response to the prompt... a sneak up on ya kinda love poem...
Fire held in the joined palms, scintillating image.
we hold it in the palm...
love this.
I particularly love the last verse. Really good.
Thanks gautami. Not in disagreement with any others here, but all I might wish for if wishes I get is one simple thing - more please! Nice "feeling" within this poem. ~neil
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