Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Sunday, April 10, 2011
poetic vacuum
yellowed thread of that green balloon entangles your pauses, you find vacuum in my knees- the gap between my feet and ground, you fill it with sensual poetry.
I love the vaccuum. I read your piece before really looking at the picture. See her float afterwards was a delight! Thanks for this Sunday morning treat. ~Brenda
This, I thought, was an appropriate response to Brendan's poem today. Sensual poetry..filling the spaces. Wonderful piece..I liked "entangles your pauses" too.
23 comments:
wow, tight and inviting. I got sucked in.
Entangles your pauses. Certainly has that feel to it. Enjoyed the way you implement this style. Very effective.
Great flow and rhythm with this Sunday 160. Cool that you combined the two challenges. Thanks for playing along again this week.
I love the vaccuum. I read your piece before really looking at the picture. See her float afterwards was a delight! Thanks for this Sunday morning treat.
~Brenda
wow...you open up quite a can in a few words...big smiles.
I love how the yellow thread entangles your pauses and that the gap is filled with sensual poetry!
Beautifully illustrated, delicious little poem!
quid
Gravity defying post!
Love it, Gautami, perfect to the photo.
Pamela
super beautiful.
i love the way it ends.
The fun colors and the poetic depth merge beautifully.
This, I thought, was an appropriate response to Brendan's poem today. Sensual poetry..filling the spaces. Wonderful piece..I liked "entangles your pauses" too.
Phew, you got me bouncing off the pavement!
<3
"Entangles your pauses." That's fabulous.
Love the first four lines of this: stunning stuff; solid finish.
Nice phrasing here. You give a little but leave us a lot to add ourselves. Cute!
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/04/11/evolution-in-a-nutshell/
fabulous :)
I read your info, then a few of your poems, and I can totally see the mind of a mathematician in your beautiful, calculated poems. Thanks for sharing!
Ok, seriously this is fabulous. I am enrapture by the play and beauty here.
love it.
A++
sensual poetry is something that is good for me :)
get up, get up, get up...
the gaps are where
the wonder lies =)
Interesting Input.Liked it!
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