it is wholly nigh
to say that
April showers bring May flowers
merciless heat has no place for rains
it only support abrasive dust
the underside of over-bridge
is as dry as it can be
We see fishes reflected back
images merge with one another
"paleness of the dry acrid earth
engulf the Sun into their fold,
are they comrade in arms?"
26 comments:
Nicely done!
=)
I can certainly relate to this piece! Nice work!
Very well written !!!
Nicely crafted~
why YES they are how astute of you!
Well done!
The mirage resonance of heat is beautifully suggested! Lovely poem!
I get so lost in your poetic expressions, and their deep meaning, that I always enjoy a second (or even third) read.
You are gifted.
xoRobyn
Merciless heat it is! Hope is the rain that washes away the dust!~Ames
It's almost like you made us feel like those fish..worried that water might run dry..not cool even though in some water..a scratchy, hot, uncomfortable feeling..Jae
Lovely. The title says it all!
Extreemely well done - enjoyed reading this
Such beautiful imagery.
I will call this the weather poem
beautifully done
very sense making ..
interesting flow of words...well said!
WOW ..... profound.
This rocks for me!
nicely put ...well done
Beautiful piece and so pertinent as we so often stupidly wrestle with nature.
A++
Thanks for linking,
cute poem.
"it only support abrasive dust"
"We see fishes reflected back
images merge with one another"
These images put the reader in the moment and make this piece very visual. I like this a lot!
Namaste..........cj
beautiful poem gautami. with a faint promise of rain the weather has turned hot here too.
trisha
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coming from a rainy area it is fascinating for me to be reminded of how other parts of the world exist so differently ... this was really well done ...
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Incredible imagery here. I felt like you were writing this for me.
Wonderful word crafting.
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