Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Nicely done Shadorma One suggestion on the second line the syllable count is I think one over - you could take " that" out and it would still read nicely Hope you enjoyed getting to know the Shadorma
forget night,
of frozen impact 
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Nicely done Shadorma
One suggestion on the second line the syllable count is I think one over - you could take " that" out and it would still read nicely
Hope you enjoyed getting to know the Shadorma
Moondustwriter
superb!
A++
Amazing, Gautami.
whooo, amazing words strung together here.
amoral rendition -- let me stay away from doing renditions like that!
xoxo
Frozen Impact... powerful
I like that photo, btw.
ouch, that was a bullet!!!! :)
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Thank you. I enjoyed your exploration of the form. :-)
wow! amazing!
Luna
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i think in many ways we have forgotten that stillness having extended our night with artificial light...but stillness we need...
Nice tight poem.
Nice tight light.
intriguing photo, too! :)
quite beautiful!
this reminder of stillness, it gave me peace. thank you.
fascinating
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