march left me in a lurch
suppose it was in a hurry to go
to exit 181, 1/2 mile ahead.
to usher in the harsh summer
the april sun hits out at me.
painfully, I carry it on myself
a tempest in the making-
burning my skin in the process
loud march should have stayed
if the compass had not let it stray
maybe it needed my persuasive power
which I needed to use.
"riches of the disappearing months,
I try to collect in my palm-
waiting for you to pluck it from there"
35 comments:
This is really lovely. March weather here is still lingering, and as a result. I'm not finding April quite so much - at least yet. ☼
Very cool! especially the last section.
thanks for visiting!
If you don't like the weather here, just wait five minutes. April is barely out of the starting blocks, give it time!
'to usher the harsh summer'
sounds so delicious on the tongue!
"Loud march" is also a good play on words, as loud marches for freedom are taking place all over the world, even here in Madison, though our stakes are far less than the brave souls in Syria, Yemen, Egypt, and other places where peace is not a priority of some police...
Bless you, Gautami, for providing a bit of whimsy and a some food for thought. I'm at Writer's Isle this April as well:
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/04/01/the-man-who-became-an-island/
Peace, Amy
I like the way March marches on - I just wish we had a bit of that april heat in Manchester!
Happy Napowrimo!!
<3
"Loud March" love that, Gautami.
Happy napo!
Pamela
End of March always gives me a new beginning..yes, I was born on April 1st... and then which other date would have been right for me to take birth..thanks Gautami for a wonderful poem as usual..
A lovely poem, and how I wish it could apply here - we could do with some of that April heat. We have snow, ice, ice and snow - and,did I say, snow!
An original slant. I like it very much.
It sprang past didn't it! Like a March-hare..Jae
I love reading your poems..unique and thought provoking.
great poem. I am glad to see March go it was cold and snowy here and I am ready for Spring.
March was a bit too schizophrenic for me and so far April has deluged us with her rain. Maybe May would work out.
Very nice. I wish I wasn't so rock-solid in my conviction that I suck at writing poetry...I love writing it, but I refuse to let it out into the world.
"loud march....." is such a great description, and it succinctly sums up an event that takes 31 days to complete! Great Centus!
Namaste..........cj
Such an intriguing way to use our prompt...a season exits...cool...Peace and blessings
I am in awe of this bit of poetics. You have a gift.
They do disappear fast don't they. Like sand through your fingers.This was lovely!~Ames
Well done and a very haunting picture you painted !!!
Oh, to have the ability to keep perfect days with us?
Great poem!
great poem and yes in reality for us Jan and Feb were far worse than March that did seem to slip by rather quickly!
I can feel the season exiting right now.
Good job.
=)
Your words are like a gun loaded with bullets of significance!
love the image of the compass that directs our life through seasons, very nice.
how come some people are SO gifted with words I loved it thank you
wow. you are truly gifted at writing.
This is beautiful! You really have a gift! I'm glad you enjoy sharing it.
Stunning! I think it is such a talent to be able to write poetry!
It takes a talented writer to use that prompt in a poem. This is really good. I enjoyed it.
xoRobyn
sheilagh lee said: nicely done.
and March really is so loud ... i just didn't realize it until i read it here ... beautifully crafted!
Delightful! I don't envy you your harsh summer sun.
really like the style you've carved out with these. And I hear you about the weather - in NYC, we're still mired in winter.
Beautiful and poignant writing. This was like a gift...I read it through several times and each time another layer of meaning was revealed.
Absolutely lovely writing.
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