playing powerfully
meaningful medly of melodies
within wavering waves.
songs, stimulating, simulating, simply straggling
inscribed inside interestingly
as thoughts; travesty travels , trailing
lagging. loftily lumbers
frivolously frolicking, fulfilling
contriving conclusive confidences
frivolously frolicking, fulfilling
lagging. loftily lumbers
as thoughts. travesty travels, trailing,
inscribed inside interestingly-
songs, stimulating, simulating, simply straggling
within wavering waves,
meaningful medly of melodies
playing powerfully.
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I suppose it does not make much sense. I took the irrational part of One Single Impression's prompt, Circle. And I can always call it poetic liberty!
26 comments:
O but it is rational! It captures the irrational of all that we are, the lives we lead, the thoughts we have! It is just perfect!
Adore the rolling sounds of the words too! They circle and wheel over the whole concept!
Beautiful!
Gemma
it make sense to me too
it's like playing music on a gloriously drunken evening
(obviously not something i would ever do)
and all held together by that alliteration
cheers (in all senses perhaps) :)
I'm with Greyscale and Floots. You have created music that is irrational in the way that circles are irrational--eternal and perfect. God bless.
Writing in Faith: Poems
Delightful alliteration :)
To me, your words are the music of water flowing over rounded rocks.
Yes, a symphony of alliteration! An alliterative fancy! You've done a really good job! Just love it! :D
Gautama, I'm sorry but my "One Single Impression" is at http://maryt.wordpress.com
Gautami, I called you the Buddha! I guess that's not so bad! Sorry again.
I love the alliterations.
Not only is it calming but it was fun to read out loud with all those magnificent alliterations.
Well done!
frolicksome, feisty, fervent, free-spirited, fun... alliteration always attracts aping... eeeek.... I like floots' idea of "gloriously drunken" music. Nice.
I love your use of alliteration!
And I forgot: SYMMETRY! Which I love here. I respond strongly to symmetry where ever I see it, so I love this.
I like it. There is a chaos to it that is quite of a circular nature.
Even in your irrationality you cannot escape your linear mathematical mind. It circles back upon its self and brings order to chaos. :)
Rose
xo
Very interesting words and thoughts. Love all the all the alliteration too.
Kind of like Jazz poetry!
"Give me liberty or give me death" or some such quote. I like all your words circling together.
Irrational? Nice flow and rhythm circling...
I agree with eveyone else, the alliteration was fun to read, especially out loud. Reminds me of how I feel after too much coffee.
agree with the comments of others - it kind of tinkles along like music or water bubbling along...to its own beat.(sorry deleted my post as too many spelling errors...its late at night here...)
I thought it was lovely. It was like taking a lovely walk and then turning around to come back home.
oh what a perfect cirlce you weave...makes complete sense to me.. it does.
it for sure makes sense.
i love the alliteration and how you use that so perfectly
the movement and sounds conveyed are charming as is your alliterations reflected...
this feels so... playful!
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