Thursday, October 13, 2011

hambre

the vibrations
permeates into me
I try to transfer those to you
will you please accept it-
letting me have my way with you
piece by piece...
I....hunger.....for.....you
you.....hunger....for....me
why don't we let our bodies
follow our mind and hearts

"come admire the bond,
those silken ties......silken ties"

24 comments:

Eric 'Bubba' Alder said...

Such a shared vibration can indeed be quite a delight!

oldegg said...

Don't just talk about it...do it!

Well, I would certainly be caught in those silken ties, trapped in the net of your words.

Andy Sewina said...

WoW! Now you're talking!!!

<3

G-Man said...

Gautami...WOW!!!
I Love Erotic 55's
You are Marvelous at it.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Alice Audrey said...

Hot! Now you're cooking.

Brian Miller said...

hey silken ties just add to the fun...smiles. hot piece...

Ella said...

Wow, you did a brilliant job with this one! The silken ties says it all ;D

jaerose said...

What a sizzling piece Gautami..seizing the moment..Jae

Kikit said...

hi there. i love this one. you inspire me to make another stimulating poem. :)

mylittlewordz said...

Nicely erotic, especially the bit about bodies following minds.
Jamie.

izzy said...

-Heaven- ( Wish I could italicize
it) Thanks

Celestial Dreamz said...

so well done :)

Claudia said...

hmmm yes...why not...they should..smiles

MorningAJ said...

As long as both agree. Go for it!

My 55

Mama Zen said...

Yes!

Mama Zen said...

Yes!

Unnamed Psalmist said...

simple and true!

Ramesh Sood said...

Absolutely beauiful..see you tmrw at OSI..

SandyCarlson said...

Nicely done!

Your prompt, paper, is up at OSI in the morning. Sorry about the short notice. I will link the post to your site.

Susie Clevenger said...

sensual, suggestive, delightful :)

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

A very sensual piece of writing!

Eileen

rch said...

I'm all shook up over this one (sorry couldn't resist) great job!

Sheilagh Lee said...

Great poem

The Poetry Palace said...

way to go.