Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Sunday, October 02, 2011
unspoken
I wrote that headline in my note book you tore it lonely page wandered bereft of energy a joke you said I know better
I am so happy that music is here and everyone loves to listen to this can sure help when expressing feeling and words can not be found or the right ones can not be said great job http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/03/memories-and-photographs-of-you/#comment-1370
I wrote that headline in my note book
23 comments:
Very nice use of form and the words. Glad to have you join us at POETIC BLOOMINGS.
could be...as music certainly speaks to the soul...
Fabulous 160!
Nicely done! A disenfranchised thought and feeling....
Well composed and played!
nice - this is authentic
words full of energy...thanks Gautami!
Really nice!:)
brief but visible. the fragment of page, the missive misguided. there is a wistfulness here, borne aloft like a scrap of paper.
liked it very much.
Very well done, I thoroughly enjoyed this!
strength.
please have a wonderful tuesday.
A very nice write!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/two-yearning-heart/
As usual, your words are heavy with meaning. There is certainly power in music.
Namaste..........cj
Yes, thank God there is music. People are difficult to understand. Should one try at all?
Yes, thank God there is music. People are difficult to understand. Should one try at all?
I am so happy that music is here and everyone loves to listen to this can sure help when expressing feeling and words can not be found or the right ones can not be said great job
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/03/memories-and-photographs-of-you/#comment-1370
Very nice response to the prompts.
Hello.
Music & poetry...is anything else needed?
Nicely done as usual.
Thief In The Night
cute.
smart words.
So good! I love the subtle form and the pause that overtakes the last line.
so much power in so few words. love it.
Who would you let get that close that they could tear your words... there is more here.
Music is the language beyond words...
This Fence Knows Riddles
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