Poetry for me is a way of living, it comes out of nowhere and I have to write it down. How I write, what I write, I decide. I am not asking you to be judgemental. I am gifted with the ability to see beyond the obvious.
Sunday, October 30, 2011
snaky tales
total darkness pitch black which contains eternity their eyes merge after a while heat shakes the hearts slippery slithering bodies of snakes entangle in knots
This is the first 160 I've read ... I would rather not meet this hole of darkness!! I know there are those who love snakes, however, I am not one of them.
24 comments:
tight 160.
Happy Sunday.
eww...that would be a nightmare to fall into a ball of snakes...
Oooo Yuck!
Loved the macabre image you managed to score into my mind!
I hate snakes, but love this 160. Thanks for playing along.
i like the image of the eyes. if they merged on dice, that would really mess up the game ;)
Creepy.
nightmarish ... you have painted and incredibly vivid picture with so few words.
This is the first 160 I've read ... I would rather not meet this hole of darkness!! I know there are those who love snakes, however, I am not one of them.
scary images i don't want to tangle... happy sunday ~
A perfectly unnerving poem that suits this season.
excellent scary images and well done Happy Halloween enjoy this day and night
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/30/the-witch-is-transformed/
What vivid images!
Perfect Halloween fare. Snakes and all!
=)
very cool
So well written! Excellent!
But so creepy too.
I see that scene from that Indiana Jones movie where he jumps down into a snake pit. So creepy.
I am thankful that there are not many snakes in Sweden and none in Northern Sweden.
Great text. This was not an easy one to do, so you did very very well.
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna's SC wk 78 'A Study in Black'
don't mind them at all, matting balls for garter snakes are harmless, but I sure wouldn't want to fall into one
That would not be fun to me. Dont like snakes. Great write
Blessings
Really creepy, but terrific poem!
fear snakes,
sharp imagery,smiles.
Very nice!
You fill so much emotion and imagery in such so words. Not a gift many can boast of. Pleasure reading your work, truly.
Titus
The slight ambiguity leads to other naughty thoughts, especially since snakes often mate in congregational balls like that. Nicely written.
Yikes. I felt very Indiana Jones here.
Snakes.
Shudder.
But really cool writing.
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