I scribble on you
with pencil colours
blue is normal
orange heaves for me
red laughs at my passion
green just watches
the imminent moodiness
lines, and the ripples
create an illusion
of double rainbow
which engulf me
my fingers violate the violets
shrinking or otherwise
isn't that purple so deep
as to cause an yellowish tinge
on your pages-
you are a witness to all the hues
all the shades, that is I.
"my diary, with you I share all secrets,
no colour tampers with my spirit"
33 comments:
I loved the way you crafted this poem, shared all your colors.
Yes, we're composed of many colours, some which we may display boldly and others that are kept in the recesses!
You are a person like me! I love all colors - except black, navy and brown.
Finally, a post using the words assigned that does not deal with disaster in some way. Thank you.
Many of us put a light hearted cast on it, but disaster nonetheless.
You decided a rainbow worked fine. Happiness!
Beautifully consructed poem Gautami.
Pamela
so colorfully done Gautami... :)
true, no color can ruin the pages of one's diary as it holds all dear precious moments and memories!
loved this immensely dear! :)
Feel like I just watched you dance in shawls of every hue. Especially like "my fingers violate the violets," wonderful sound on the tongue. Love what you did with the prompt,
Elizabeth
I love this.....One that I wish I had written. LOL!
Colors are a fabulous entry and description of moods..
Very Well done!
Lady Nyo
Such a lovely poem, well done!
Such a lovely poem. I like the way you've brought colours to life!
colors create such moods - wonderful how you play with them in your poem...and i love the last line...you are a witness to all the hues
all the shades, that is I...
What a rainbow full of thought and feeling..such a creative use of the prompts..Jae
I love how you've made words that usually evoke disaster and darkness mean color and brightness. Great post. Happy 3WW! Mine is up as well!
This was a very heartfelt rainbow of feelings.
I really like this, what a wonderful use of the prompt words. Thank you for sharing your colours. :-)
i see a painting within a poem. loved it!
Just beautiful.
A little different use of each color, brought them to life. Very nice.
Enchanting use of each color
Really nice poem! And a lovely idea, writing journals in different colors... mind you, my variable handwriting probably says enough about my mood at any particular writing :)
A composite of colors is what we need, I agree.
A spectrum of emotion, we are of many colours within some without names. Lovely title and poem. Enjoyed.
this was too much real :)) i enjoyed this !
Very colorful! :) I like the double rainbow - so vivid.
you are a witness to all the hues
all the shades, that is I.
Your litany of colors is a window --a delightfully happy window.
Very interesting poem.
This was wonderful! Colors are so important to life and I guess what we like and dislike speaks more about us than words
Guatami, I'm with Christopher. You went with images of natural color combined with the beauty of one's soul. Loved it! Amy
I love the take you had on this prompt. Personifying the colors is brilliant.
Ahh "violate the violets" & "red laughs at my passion" nice:)
You've a thing for colours...
Liked it!
As usual... brilliant! Great 3WW. Wonderful use of the words. Love and Light, Sender
lovely style...
how is everything?
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