Sunday, September 19, 2010

something fishy

marinated fish
goes into that flat frying pan
oh, splattered bliss

bliss leaks from sides
releasing smells into my brain
making mouth water

but fish seek coke
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I am following it from about fish, chips, nothing much else. Go check that out too!

Why not write a poem or a story in exactly 160 characters each Sunday? Spaces included! Head for Monkey Man for Sunday 160!

PS: No, I wasn't cooking the fish. It is all imagination.

26 comments:

Leo said...

new template, Gautami? :) seems ok, but the previous one sort of had a charm to it :D

anyways, cooking something that tasty should definitely make the mouth water I think :) though not a fish fan myself ;)

thanks for joining in at Haiku Heights :)

Ramesh Sood said...

Lovely haikus.. Gautami.. not into non veg food of any kind so won't won't mind joining fish for a coke..

Well written as usual..

Claudia said...

agh - i'm getting hungry….VERY descriptive writing!

mine's here

joanny said...

sweet and catchy, pass on the fish, but will drink some coke...
Nice poem 160.

Joanny ---

Nanka said...

The only kind of fish I like is Fried Fish with Chips. Not to forget the coke. :)
Two lovely fishy poems!! Enjoyed reading.

Rumya said...

Lovely Haikus. I love fish!! :D

Brian Miller said...

i enjoy a good fish...tasty 160. love the anticipation in those moments as you are cooking...

my 160

Teresa said...

Nice Haiku, but I must pass on the fish. So nice to know I'm not really the only vegetarian in the world!

steveroni said...

Hey...I LIKE this 160! But I always have trouble waiting for the marination....

HERE is mine

Monkey Man said...

You got my mouth watering with this 160. Thanks for playing.

Alice Audrey said...

Aren't you supposed to wait until the fish is served to start drinking?

My 160 is here.

PattiKen said...

I can hear the sizzle. My mouth is watering too.

Rajlakshmi said...

were you cooking it :P
nice write :)

gospelwriter said...

I liked the first stanza especially... love splattered bliss

Jingle said...

love your Haiku 160.
brilliant job!

My Sunday 160

moondustwriter said...

I think the taste lingers in your poem. What a savory piece for MMs 160.

Nice to meet you my dear

smiles from the Moon

CityMom2 said...

Wish I had a fresh catch now! Coke rocks.
Very nice olfactory musings.
Citymom

Prayer Girl said...

I could see, hear and taste this 160. It doesn't get much better than that. :)

PG

Victoria said...

Very sensate...well done.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I was wondering what sort of coke you were referring to...

Candied Apple Bliss

Dianne said...

A very graphic spattering of poetry. Well done. Thanks for visiting my 160, I work in a hospital so todays post is about a patient.

SandyCarlson said...

Delicious, delightful, satisfying!

G-Man said...

Awesome 160 My friend..
Love Haikus

Someone Is Special said...

Lovely 160.. I enjoyed the Haiku's

--Someone Is Special--

Kerry O'Connor said...

This was delightful - I smiled through the first stanza but my mouth was watering through the second

kkrige said...

yum! Delish poem :)