Sunday, October 02, 2011

unspoken

I wrote that headline in my note book
you tore it
lonely page wandered
bereft of energy
a joke you said
I know better

music is the only language you understand


24 comments:

Poetic Bloomings said...

Very nice use of form and the words. Glad to have you join us at POETIC BLOOMINGS.

Brian Miller said...

could be...as music certainly speaks to the soul...

Monkey Man said...

Well played.

Mama Zen said...

Fabulous 160!

SandyCarlson said...

Nicely done! A disenfranchised thought and feeling....

Mary said...

Well composed and played!

Old Ollie said...

nice - this is authentic

Sandra said...

words full of energy...thanks Gautami!

Tarang Sinha said...

Really nice!:)

shawnacymariekiker said...

brief but visible. the fragment of page, the missive misguided. there is a wistfulness here, borne aloft like a scrap of paper.
liked it very much.

roughwaterjohn said...

Very well done, I thoroughly enjoyed this!

ρομπερτ said...

strength.

please have a wonderful tuesday.

Marbles in My Pocket said...

A very nice write!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/two-yearning-heart/

cj Schlottman said...

As usual, your words are heavy with meaning. There is certainly power in music.

Namaste..........cj

Harshad mehta said...

Yes, thank God there is music. People are difficult to understand. Should one try at all?

Harshad mehta said...

Yes, thank God there is music. People are difficult to understand. Should one try at all?

Ann LeFlore said...

I am so happy that music is here and everyone loves to listen to this can sure help when expressing feeling and words can not be found or the right ones can not be said great job
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/03/memories-and-photographs-of-you/#comment-1370

Pam said...

Very nice response to the prompts.

Andy said...

Hello.
Music & poetry...is anything else needed?

Nicely done as usual.

Thief In The Night

Morning said...

cute.
smart words.

Suzy Q said...

So good! I love the subtle form and the pause that overtakes the last line.

emily wierenga said...

so much power in so few words. love it.

darkangelwrites said...

Who would you let get that close that they could tear your words... there is more here.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Music is the language beyond words...

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