there never is any spell to profess love
eyes play their part
ears are attuned to beat of heart
fingers make imprints on skin
palms span it with blind faith
sensitised to core
emotions surge out even though hidden
slight movements create havoc
nothing is demolished
except for barriers
entwined limbs hold seasons of eternity
celebrating togetherness of being.
33 comments:
Beautiful.
Sometimes the deepest sentiments can only be telepathic..when we open our mouths we spoil the moment..and we never get to take back the stupid things that we say.
So wonderful.
xo
fingers make imprints on skin
I liked your expression in this line a lot..
and the celebration of togetherness does mean a lot..
Gautami,all I can say is that I fell in love with these words
That is a gorgeous word hug. The language with its rhythms and luxuriousness of sound and tone wraps around the reader in a truely wonderful open loving hug.
gautami,
I know of no greater joy than the feeling communicated when we tear down the barriers between us!
rel
**celebrating togetherness of being
Loved this line...its so festive yet, spells bonding....
I so enjoy my visits to your site, and once again you made me smile.
ears are attuned to beat of heart
A gorgeous turn of phrase. The body can say so much without ever moving at all.
you always manage to cut to the essence - this is beautiful
this was beautiful,, tho i still wish there was a spell of sorts,, to make people love you......
Nothing like a good cuddle. :)
the limbs will never let go of each other. it will stand the tests of the seasons. :-)
Yes. Beautiful. (And Gautami, the comments my blog are always closed except for the HELLO post at the bottom which changes every week. Everybody does their blog their own way. It's just how I do mine. I post. I take stuff down. All the time. If you ever really need to reach me, my Email is on my profile. As always. Always open. Especially for you.)
Wonderfully written as always. The last two lines are my favorite.
beautiful, indeed!!!
beautiful, words here convey what is wordless and eternal...
This is lovely, Gautami. But then I have come to expect nothing less from you.
Beautiful as always... what a celebration of togetherness
Poetic Trails
'slight movements create havoc
nothing is demolished
except for barriers'
(sigh!) Really wonderful.
seasons of eternity - what a great thought!
Don't ever stop writing.
Simply beautiful
This struck a chord with me because of some events in my family and how they have improved relationships for the better--indeed, the barriers have come down. Thanks for articulating these feelings so beautifully.
seasons of eternity - a strong phrase with a fine vision. nice post!
Everything we see, everything we are, and have, and do serve their purpose like the seasons ~ this season serve one of its magic to break the barriers built over the years among families, and friends and people we longed to reconnect with. May this season remains the knot that ties these bonds and the connections remain tight forever.
Here's a link to My First Snow:
http://jeques.wordpress.com/2007/12/18/my-first-snowre-posted-for-writers-island/
I wish you well this season.
~ Jeques
Beautiful and senitive and passionate all at once.
very well said.
Beautiful! A love poem with great depth. I love it!
Ah the beauty and essence of love captured nicely in this poem
Fenny
fingers make imprints on skin
Beautiful... sensitive... amzzing~~:)
gosh, this is wonderful.
Ah so beautiful and such classic romantic writing that would last eternity... thank you. Superb.
UL
Gautami, what an awesome season to choose, you have captured it.
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