we are segments of ourselves-
loose ends craving to submerge
into unknown vast nothingness.
every goal attained pushes us further
towards never ending eternal space-
wasteland for some…..
“suddenly these thoughts are scattered
when you tap at my door,
i put my pen down
laughing at my above written words”
29 comments:
Happy New Year Gautami and may all your dreams come true. I know there's a novel waiting to come out.
((((Gautami)))
Still not back yet, but have a wonderful 2008.
Rose
xo
Happy New Year!
Michele sent me.
Yes, happy new year, I like the contrast between the two stanzas here.
a great way to end a year.
happy new year to you!
new year Gautami, yes, laughter too
All the best to you too for 2008 and beyond, Gautami...
Great poem, Gautami. The philosopher interrupted in his musings by real life knocking. You do so well without a prompt.
Happy New Year to you too.
Oh, this is so true! No matter how into our peotry we get, there is always something from the real world that makes us put our pen down. Right now my husband is calling from the cellar. He needs me to help him hold something on the motorcycle he is repairing.
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Happy new year!!
Ha! yeah, i can relate. I almost posted a new one with similar topic but it still needs to be picked at more before eyes can see it. Happiest of New Years to you - I have so enjoyed riding the Train with you on Mondays dear!
Happy new year, Gautami! I hope you have a word-filled 2008. :)
Another great one.
Have a wonderful new year!
Have a very happy New Year Gautami! I love your poetry--and your prose.
Nice! Happy writing in the new year, Guatami.
This one made me laugh. That's a good thing to go to sleep on.
I'm here from Michele's tonight.
Happy New Year!
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Happy New Year!
Yes more power to my p e n s.
Ha made you look.
I like being segmented and submerged, as long as you are near I feel safe.
Happy New Year Gayathri! Have a wonderful year ahead.
could be the first embarrassing moment of 2008!
never have too many comment windows open at one time.
But I know u more than that Gaya3...Gautami madam. :D
No hard feelings...plz..
Hugs.
Gautami: Wishing you bright stars, sweet dreams, deep laughter, peace in the middle of a snowstorm, and warm sunny mornings sittin' in the sun. Happy New Year! Don
Gautami, thank you for entertaining me with your inspirational works during 2007 May the New Year take you to new heights.
Knock Knock!
Gautami, I hope you have a wonderful 2008, full of even more wonderfully inspiring and inspired poetry and prose.
Happy New Year sweetz!
Keshi.
this was a fun one!
have a happy wordfilled 2008!
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gautami,
thank you for the inspirational writings that i enjoyed in the past year. continue with the good work!
Have a wonderful 2008!
A lovely touch-down!:) Happy New Year!:)
I do that alot!! Happy New Year!!
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